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Old 01-09-2010, 08:51 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I did the music challenge that has been going on on several sites, because I thought it might be fun, but... I really can't write anything short to save my life, so I ended up cheating. This was one of the better stories I wrote, and it's about Allen... surprisingly. (not)
I got the song 'Wolf and Raven' from Sonata Arctica for him: for that, I consider myself really lucky and although I wrote this in a hurry, I think it turned out pretty good.

I've also put this up in fanficion.net, but....

Notes: AU, angst.
Characters: Allen and the Millenium Earl
Summary: He destroyed everyone he wanted to save. Still, his wish was not granted. "Fear for life I wear as a ring. To bask in your favor I will kill the King."

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A young man entered the throne room through the huge front doors, dressed up neatly in a black uniform, with his head help up high in a manner that might seem arrogant to many but was really just a way for him to prevent seeing all the tainted souls that surrounded him. Many cast him and his white hair odd looks, but he didn’t care – he only cared about what he was about to do, and was intent on getting it through.

Inside, he hid the shame as he was preparing to meet his Master, the man he hated so much. He would not allow his Master see the fear in him, or how much he really hated himself - how much he hated the Master.

The walk across the room took painfully long, but he stopped after reaching the middle, waiting for permission to proceed further.

I am now like Judas, done, ashamed of what I’ve become.

His arrival was announced to the royal family, and the round man in the middle, with a top hat, raised his head and stopped the conversation he was having with his family that surrounded him. His wolf-like grin, ever present, seemed to widen as he noticed the boy – for he wasn’t much older than fifteen – and motioned for him to approach.

Allen Walker complied, feeling the eyes of everyone on him and stopped again, upon reaching the stairs on top of which his Master and his family sat. He bowed deeply.

”Have you done it?”

”Yes, my Master. I have killed the king,” Allen said, with another bow, the words tasting like poison in his mouth - he had killed the ones he was supposed to protect, the ones that were once dear to him. He turned against them, watching their blood stain the hands that they used to hold.

His hands.

His Master laughed. ”Good. You may leave, everything has been prepared for you, Mr. Walker.”

Allen shuddered as he heard but didn’t move. He remembered a dream he had had for a while now but quickly shook his head. He would be the wolf this time, he would not be the one pulled down. He would hang on to the last bit of his humanity as tightly as he could.

”Hm? Something wrong, boy?” The person on his Master’s right asked, lighting a cigarette. Allen gathered up all his courage to say what he had come here to say. He only had one wish, and not once before had he requested something from his Master to whom he had been a loyal servant, despite himself.

”Grant me a wish my Master."

I am now like Judas, done, ashamed of what I’ve become.

”What could you possibly ask for? You’re invincible already, you cannot die… you’re almost like a family to us, boy,” the same man said, smirking. ”If your ’uncle’ hadn’t betrayed us, that is.”

”I’d like to be a human,” the boy stated, determination in his eyes that were now ignoring the man speaking, looking straight into his Master's golden ones, that widened upon hearing. The round man leaned back on his throne, before his expression darkened.

Silence.

”Maybe one day.”

That was all he got, Allen knew he should leave now… but he couldn’t make a move, he was too shocked – surely, he should’ve expected this. ”You are dismissed, boy.” He didn’t care. Allen looked to his left, where he could see himself – the monster he had become, reflected in the mirror… maybe that was what he was destined to be. What was there to live for, now?

A destroyer that saves.

”As you wish, Master,” he said eventually, before turning on his heels and walking away to the place where that last shred of humanity would be torn away.

He had destroyed everyone he wanted to save.
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Originally Posted by envylover View Post
No pitihän se arvata et sutki täältä löytää 8D
Oisin kyllä toivonu yaoita...
Mut hyvä tää oli ilmanki 8DD
Of course I'd be here, because I'm a feedback whore and I can never get enough.
....You seriously think that I'd write a yaoi story? Never! I thought you knew me better, after all this time.

Whoops, I forgot that I am writing one but it's crack... so it doesn't count. Thanks for reading. ^__________________^

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ohmygod, I love this!
The words just mend together,
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ohmygod, I love this!
The words just mend together,
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You're great! Awsome!
Thank you! You have no idea how happy I am to hear that!
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Awesome. I can imagine allen and the noah altogether. Coolll......
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Awesome. I can imagine allen and the noah altogether. Coolll......
Moar??
8D Thanks! I think this could be turned into a pretty long story, if I had the time and/or will to do that... Maybe one day? The point of that music challenge was to write a short story during a random song from my iPod, but I had to listen to the song many, many times before I could even write this much. This was one of the better ones that I wrote, though.
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Thank you! You have no idea how happy I am to hear that!
You're very welcome!
I really enjoyed reading it. I truly did.
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YOWZERS!! That was good!
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YOWZERS!! That was good!
BLUGAH! 8D Thank you! : It's funny how happy comments can make me, and I think that you guys just might have helped me get rid of my writer's block! Thank you!
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I think that you guys just might have helped me get rid of my writer's block! Thank you!
Lawls! Well, you're quite welcome.
Glad to help. : D
Writer's blocks are such a hassle.
I really, really, really hate 'em.
The sad thing is, I mostly am on a writer's block.
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